I love Modest Mouse. Love!

I have a beginning! Finally! They say the third time is a charm, and they lie cause it's more like the 300th time is a charm, but whatever!

Ah, I feel the need to post it here for the beginning finally being done is such an accomplishment. :p

( also it needs a title and I need suggestions )


So... sucky? (And, yes, I totally am going to go back over it with the spellcheck switched to UK English before I post it for real.)