ext_1310: (writing)
ext_1310 ([identity profile] musesfool.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] angelgazing 2005-12-05 02:07 pm (UTC)

There's a lot of space between making the narration sound exactly like the thoughts in someone's head and "See Spot run," and that's more than a simple matter of being a little less idiomatic or using proper punctuation, both of which help communicate the story, which is the point of writing it.

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