ext_104797 ([identity profile] angelgazing.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] angelgazing 2005-12-05 07:25 am (UTC)

Heh, they aren't, but you're welcome just the same? ::shrugs::

sometimes I think narration needs just a bit more formality.

I think there's a fine line here though. It's really easy yo make the narrative too formal, and then it starts to feel very clinical. Very "See Spot Run. Run, Spot, Run."

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