You have just enough finger-drumming, window-looking, pursed-lips and sighs to fill out the dialogue, so I can completely visualize the scene.
I hate to discourage anyone from paying attention in class, but I want to encourage you to write more (in this story or any other). Thanks for writing and sharing.
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I hate to discourage anyone from paying attention in class, but I want to encourage you to write more (in this story or any other). Thanks for writing and sharing.