Awww, bless. I love how cute they are when they bicker. And I especially love all those times JD manages to defy Cox; usually not on purpose, he just opens his mouth and it happens. And, of course, you captured those accidental slips perfectly. Their interaction here is lovely and perfectly in character, and the run-on sentences really suit JD and his inner-monologue. The fantasy sequences also sat well in the story, not becoming mixed-up in the real action, or clashing with the tone. In short, this was a fantastic read, thanks for writing it.